Ok, I had an hour (or two) to sit down and see what I could come up with. The attached pdf is three seperate arrangements. First is the original, no changes. Second, I've attempted to clean up the rhythmic anomalies and anomalous notes in two triplets (C# in m3 and A in m13). Third...well, lets just say I was messing about. ;-)
I'll see if I can get at least the two versions on vid sometime this weekend.